My last time pitching this logline.. lol. I just needed to get some feedback, and tweak it. This logline is related to the story DEFENSELESS, which started with While a FATHER, but I’ve received some excellent pointers.. If I’m closer on this I’ll finish it later but let me know what you think now… If you haven’t read the other two it would be hard to compare. Right Monique? Email me soon…. Thanks everyone!