A man who believes life has excluded him and a woman traumatized by childhood find connection through margin notes in a free library exchange copy of Persuasion, never suspecting the person who finally gets them lives next door.

‘… who gets them’ is vague for a grabby ending. How are they ‘gotten’? Similarly the first words are elusive ‘… life has excluded him’. Put him in a cell? The concept sound so good but the logline isn’t creating the need to read the pilot.