stakes: she does get frozen in time as the visions come forward (life endangering at times) and she also is physically manifesting wounds from the past but I can’t see how in the world to get that into the logline. I also see the karma as the antagonist, putting her into other people’s lives and sticking her neck on the line (that’s a pun if you knew the script ha ha). Her karma is attached to everyone she helps, so all benefit from her spiritual sleuthing. It’s such an intangible sounding concept, (spiritual, karma, enlightenment) that i don’t know how to make it sound concrete. I want it to read like every day life, like Six Feet Under. So putting “high stakes”-must save their lives!! Feels SO BAD. AAAARRGH!