After the death of his secret lover, a closeted small-town lawyer struggles with his drug addiction until he finds fulfillment in his long-forgotten passion: dancing

or Logline #2:

After the death of his secret lover, a closeted small-town lawyer struggles with his drug addiction and leaves his old life for a long-forgotten passion: dancing.

Can you imagine/picture it? Does it make sense to YOU?

Or does it (drug addiction, dancing) need to be explained further/differently?

And which one do you like better?

Thanks xx