When a naive and shy young man loses his humanity to an evil futuristic corporation, he tries to destroy it to free himself and others with the questionable help of two sides, good and evil, from which he finds no difference.

Hi Logline it people.

I am interested to write a novel or the script of a program, so that one day, I and the next generations can read or watch on the internet, just as I liked to watch programs on television in my childhood. But, I’m not that good at expressing myself, so I’d like you to review my work and tell me where I could improve.

Thank you.