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When an ex-con returns home to find his estranged daughter depressed by an ugly world, he aims to make the entire town litter-free in an attempt to win her back.

I reworked my concept a bit, although I still have my idea focused on litter cleanup. I figure the relationship with his daughter is sufficient stakes. The goal is achievable and specific and visual. I figure picking up litter is something a prisoner might be used to doing, so it seems a natural fit. I feel where I can see this story ending is no longer comedic, so it works better as a drama now.

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