Long time I don’t post here that’s why I’m glad to read and write loglines again and help as much as i can. I hope this logline explain itself, am i right?
Maybe it’s too long. How could I shorten it?
Greetings
Edit:
The story is about Ticks, a hybrid between a human and a feline, something very frowned upon in his kingdom since felines were assassins, also he is the only friend of the shy princess from a kingdom that is being sacked by a band of pirates whose king wants to marry the Queen.
Because of the no violence rule in the kingdom, the only way to stop him is to accuse him of his mother but if Ticks accuses him by himself then the mother would not believe him. So, he needs to find someone the mother will believe to, like a family member or something. That’s his main goal, travel through both kingdoms, land and ocean, helping people struggling because of the invasion to find this person.
The people of the princess’ kingdom call the empire “awfully violent islands” because fights are legal, also monsters and humans coexist.
Though everything is seen through Ticks perspective, the princess and more starts sharing time with ticks. The princess can be seen as a co-protagonist. Pirate king is the main antagonist and villain, since he likes violence, and Ticks don’t.
Something I could add, is that this happens during spring and the wedding is planned at summer. Considering that the world is very big, those would be very few months.
Once the Pirate King marries the queen, he will be king of all then he’ll kill all humans.
Note: I’m announcing the way the villain is defeated. Does that take away from the emotion of the story?
What other question can be made?