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When a con man discovers he has a 14-year old daughter, he struggles to bond with her while shielding her from his criminal occupation.
The way I see it, the primary plot entails the relationship of the con man, Roy, with his daughter. The long con job he pulls with his partner, Frank, is a subplot.Why?Because, for one thing, the long con is Frank's idea -- not Roy's. Roy initially refuses to do it and agrees only because he's in anRead more
The way I see it, the primary plot entails the relationship of the con man, Roy, with his daughter. The long con job he pulls with his partner, Frank, is a subplot.
Why?
Because, for one thing, the long con is Frank’s idea — not Roy’s. Roy initially refuses to do it and agrees only because he’s in an agreeable mood after seeing his daughter.? His partner is the one who takes the initiative on the long con plot thread — not Roy. Frank is in the driver’s seat; Roy is going along for the ride.
Come to find out, his partner is in the driver’s seat of the con job in more ways than one. (Spoiler alert!)
The big reveal is that the real mark is Roy.? Frank is out to manipulate him out of his considerable stash of cash.? And that his daughter is not his daughter, but the hook used to reel Roy into his partner’s con.
(The movie is a con job on the audience as well. We don’t find out about it before the protagonist does. )
No matter. A logline is a description of what the protagonist knows or believes at the time he commits to an objective goal — not what he discovers in the 3rd Act.? At the end of Act 1, Roy believes his daughter is the real deal and everything he does is motivated by that belief.
One other point: there is a denouement, a scene of closure to the relationship between the protagonist and his “daughter” — they meet a year later. It’s not a joyous reunion, but it is a resolution of their relationship.? In contrast, there is no closure, no resolution with his partner, the mastermind of the con against Roy. He just disappears with his cut of the loot.
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This logline is an example of the challenge for loglining stories in the scifi and fantasy genres:? the dramatic problem often makes sense only if you first understand the dramatic setting.? But because I didn't, the logline left me puzzled. I didn't know what "cog" meant and I had not clue as to thRead more
This logline is an example of the challenge for loglining stories in the scifi and fantasy genres:? the dramatic problem often makes sense only if you first understand the dramatic setting.? But because I didn’t, the logline left me puzzled. I didn’t know what “cog” meant and I had not clue as to the setting of the story to comprehend why taking a name would be breaking the law.
You could lead off with the something like?”In a dystopic? world where everyone has a number instead of a name” — but that’s already 13 words — over 1/2 the ideal length of a logline — expended? to establish the setting before the protagonist’s struggle make any sense.
fwiw
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Richiev offers a good movie as an example to compare with this one. In the "Wizard of Oz" Dorothy is never so enraptured with anyone or anything in Oz that she would be tempted to want to stay.? From the git go, her unalterable goal is to get back home.? But she doesn't know how, doesn't have any meRead more
Richiev offers a good movie as an example to compare with this one.
In the “Wizard of Oz” Dorothy is never so enraptured with anyone or anything in Oz that she would be tempted to want to stay.? From the git go, her unalterable goal is to get back home.? But she doesn’t know how, doesn’t have any means of getting back.? The story is set up so that she must contact an enabler, someone with power to get her back home.? So her specific game plan to get back home is to persuade the Wizard to make that possible.
A logline for the movie might be something like: “When a tornado transports a young Kansas girl to a magical kingdom, she must persuade its all-powerful Wizard into enabling her to go home.” (24 words)
(Well, of course, come to find out he’s not all-powerful.? That she’s had the means all along to get back home — the red slippers.? ?But a logline is written from the perspective of what the protagonist knows at the time she commits to her objective goal? — not what she eventually discovers.)
In contrast, the logline for this premise provides us no clue as to her game plan to get back to the real world.? Dorothy must convince the Wizard. What, specifically, must the protagonist in this logline do?
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