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Posted: 2019-09-04T20:19:16+10:00 In:

A NASA space drone pilot discovers a mysterious wormhole in space that could lead to preventing the deaths of his family three years previously.

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    1. Singularity

      “When he discovers a wormhole in space that could prevent the deaths of his family three years prior, a NASA drone pilot must…” (Then tell us what he does about it)

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    2. Samurai

      Richiev:

      When he discovers a wormhole in space that could prevent the deaths of his family three years prior, a NASA drone pilot must? (Then tell us what he does about it)

      I agree with Richiev. You miss the 3rd element of the logline, the ACTION (see the formula, here).

      CHARACTER: a NASA drone pilot.
      EVENT: He discovers a wormhole.
      ACTION: He has to send the drone into the hole.

      Wait, what? Why is he a drone pilot? Major McConaughey must get his own ass in the hole. Otherwise what is the big deal about this movie’s action?

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