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thedarkhorseSamurai
Posted: November 14, 20192019-11-14T22:31:33+10:00 2019-11-14T22:31:33+10:00In: Horror

Imprisoned by a cannibalistic backwoods family, two runaway bank robbers must team up with their own hostages ? to get out alive and with their money.

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    1. thedarkhorse Samurai
      2019-11-14T22:33:48+10:00Added an answer on November 14, 2019 at 10:33 pm

      ORIGINAL LOGLINE: Two wanted bank robbers must team up with their hostages when they become prisoners to cannibalistic hillbillies.

      INTENTION: on the run/wanted/to be free/to get out with the money and their lives.
      OBSTACLE: trapped/ facing an evil far worse than them.

      Original logline:

      Two wanted criminals on the run from New Mexico must team up with their hostages when they come across cannibalistic hillbillies in the backwoods of Texas.

      -Chopped off the locations. Not needed.

      -Made them bank robbers so you know they want to get out with the money.

      – “To come across” is too vague. We need to know they will become trapped.

      Another logline/a bit more vague:

      Two criminals must team up with their hostages to survive an escalating ordeal with backwoods cannibals.

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    2. thedarkhorse Samurai
      2019-11-14T23:38:11+10:00Added an answer on November 14, 2019 at 11:38 pm

      I’ll try this again…

      When they are taken prisoner by a cannibalistic backwoods family, two runaway bank robbers must team up with their own hostages – in order to get out alive and with their money.

       

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    3. thedarkhorse Samurai
      2019-11-14T23:41:39+10:00Added an answer on November 14, 2019 at 11:41 pm

      I’ll chop that down too…

      Imprisoned by a cannibalistic backwoods family, two runaway bank robbers must team up with their own hostages ? to get out alive and with their money.

      Working title: CAPTIVES.

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