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Posted: October 9, 20152015-10-09T01:01:43+10:00 2015-10-09T01:01:43+10:00In: Examples

When two thriving bio engineers finally combine the perfect match of dna, they soon realise that they must stop their own creation before it escalate.

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    1. Neer Shelter Singularity
      2015-10-09T13:38:20+10:00Added an answer on October 9, 2015 at 1:38 pm

      The logline describes backstory and act one of the film but nothing more because of that the logline fails to answer the following questions:

      What does their creation do or get up to?
      What is at stake their town?
      Their country?
      The world?

      What specifically is their goal and how will they pursue it?

      Hope this helps.

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