Penpusher
Posted: 2017-09-15T11:27:08+10:00 In:

It is year 2022′ the world has been divided into two. Nikali, the healer , an outsider to the cycle, needs to break into the cycle to get the ancestors DNA and return it back to her land. But what she does with the DNA will forever change the course of humanity.

It is year 2022′ the world has been divided into two. Nikali, the healer , an outsider to the cycle, needs to break into the cycle to get the ancestors DNA and return it back to her land. But what she does with the DNA will forever change the course of humanity.
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    1. Singularity

      Nikki,

      Loglines have a few conventions that are easily learned and just as easily implemented. To get a better grasp on these conventions, I suggest you read through the ‘Formula’ tab on the top bar.

      To get you started, no need for names (unless a historical figure or pre existing IP), best to keep it 30 words or less. Good loglines describe a flawed main character, a powerfully motivating inciting incident, stakes and a compelling goal – all connected via a cause and effect relationship.

      All the best,
      Nir.

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    2. Penpusher

      ok let me go study a little bit more and come back and try this again. Thanks Nir.

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    3. Singularity

      I can’t picture the world divided into two… Is it divided between, men and women? is it divided between black and white? Is it physically cut in half?

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