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  1. Posted: December 2, 2020In: Biography

    An intern is tasked with IT maintenance work for the first time on his employer’s logline website by writing a test logline for the site, in an effort to locate any technical difficulties to fix.

    Mike Pedley Singularity
    Added an answer on December 2, 2020 at 7:01 pm

    Nailed it! Best logline I've seen to date. I'd watch this.

    Nailed it! Best logline I’ve seen to date. I’d watch this.

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  2. Posted: April 15, 2020In: Biography

    A story based on the life of Marek Edelman, the last leader of the Warsaw Ghetto Uprising: When the Nazis set up the ghetto, orphaned Jewish errand boy decides to stay with his beloved and print the underground press, but when the Nazis start liquidating the ghetto, he saves his comrades, becoming the last leader of the Warsaw Ghetto Uprising.

    dpg Singularity
    Added an answer on April 15, 2020 at 12:25 pm

    Nicolasj:It is not critical to lay out the character arc in a logline.? Although the character arc can be suggested by one or two adjectives describing a character flaw.It is more important to describe the basic plot.? In the case of your script. where are you beginning the story of Marek Edelman??Read more

    Nicolasj:

    It is not critical to lay out the character arc in a logline.? Although the character arc can be suggested by one or two adjectives describing a character flaw.

    It is more important to describe the basic plot.? In the case of your script. where are you beginning the story of Marek Edelman?? When the occupying Germans herded Jews into the confines of? Warsaw ghetto in November, 1940?? Earlier?? Later?? What is the inciting incident that sets the plot in motion?

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  3. Posted: May 2, 2019In: Biography

    A social progressive born on the brink of twentieth century America struggles to form and maintain the ACLU throughout the World Wars while coming to terms with his own ethically dubious past

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    Added an answer on October 6, 2019 at 10:45 am

    I love historical stories but this is what I need to know. So he's a 20th century American who creates the ACLU (had to look it up),? but struggles to maintain it because of his past? Because of supremists?? Because of ?? What stops the movement growing? What impact does it have?? What's his role -Read more

    I love historical stories but this is what I need to know.

    So he’s a 20th century American who creates the ACLU (had to look it up),? but struggles to maintain it because of his past? Because of supremists?? Because of ?? What stops the movement growing? What impact does it have?? What’s his role – is it him and his mates? A couple of lawyers? Is he white? what made him start this movement?

    I think some obstacles to the goal of creating the ACLU? would help align the story especially if it’s a specific person as opposed to the ACLU group as a whole.

    Sounds very interesting.

    So a 20th century American white lawyer?? creates the ACLU because? but struggles to maintain it because? racists, bullies, government, his reputation, betrayal??? All ideas-? I don’t know the story but if I know what he’s fighting against and who he is it tells me the conflict….

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