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  1. Posted: April 14, 2018In: Comedy

    Sabotaged on her studio debut, a novice filmmaker must produce her blockbuster without funds and with local amateurs to prove herself, before she loses the rights to her script.

    Nettle Samurai
    Added an answer on April 16, 2018 at 1:26 pm

    It sounds good. Few suggestions that come to my mind: For E.g., Anurag Kashyap is an Indian filmmaker. Before becoming a prominent filmmaker he used to write scripts for the studios for free. He is known for choosing locations that are budget friendly. Once (I think on his first project), he leasedRead more

    It sounds good. Few suggestions that come to my mind:
    For E.g., Anurag Kashyap is an Indian filmmaker. Before becoming a prominent filmmaker he used to write scripts for the studios for free.
    He is known for choosing locations that are budget friendly. Once (I think on his first project), he leased an abandoned filthy place/building as his film’s location. He leased it with the condition that he will get the place clean. And he and his amateur crew did clean it, painted it new and after the film was shot, he handed the building back and today it runs as a restaurant building. (He had to clear bags of pigeon shit from that abandoned building)
    This made his project’s budget under control.

    Conflicts can be created giving such challenges to your character.

    The novice filmmaker must prove herself before she loses the right to her script: It can be for instance, she must make her own film before the project is handed over to someone else. LOSING THE RIGHT does not sound correct as they (screenwriters) are protected and studio always has the fear of being blacklisted if they inappropriately get the rights.

    It can be (in your words) : Sabotaged on her studio debut, a novice filmmaker must produce her blockbuster before her ambitious project is handed over.

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  2. Posted: April 12, 2018In: Comedy

    After the eccentric field reporter she’s been ordered to keep sober falls off the wagon, a camera shy PA must over come her case of Tourettes in order to bring back a huge story or lose her job.

    Jessie Samurai
    Added an answer on April 13, 2018 at 12:32 am

    I?d find it hilarious to watch, especially, if it takes her a while. Not sure how many slip ups she can get away with. Also curious how she?ll go about overcoming her Tourrettes. Is there another interesting part of the story there? Worth loglining?

    I?d find it hilarious to watch, especially, if it takes her a while. Not sure how many slip ups she can get away with. Also curious how she?ll go about overcoming her Tourrettes. Is there another interesting part of the story there? Worth loglining?

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  3. Posted: April 7, 2018In: Comedy

    A Vegas waitress tripled in size falls for the scientist who accidentally enlarged her, sacrificing newfound showroom stardom to save him when he’s kidnapped by her abusive ex, a blackmailing mobster and a wealthy, widowed former showgirl.

    Nicholas Andrew Halls Samurai
    Added an answer on April 11, 2018 at 3:30 pm

    "Tripled in size" ... so, she's like, a giant? 5 meters tall? How would doing ANYTHING jeopardise stardom for a person 5 meters tall? That's like, twice as tall as the biggest person ever. She can save the man she loves and then just step back into the limelight? We need some clarity. "When her abusRead more

    “Tripled in size” … so, she’s like, a giant? 5 meters tall?

    How would doing ANYTHING jeopardise stardom for a person 5 meters tall? That’s like, twice as tall as the biggest person ever. She can save the man she loves and then just step back into the limelight? We need some clarity.

    “When her abusive ex kidnaps her new beau, a waitress recently turned into a giant must get him back.”

    This logline also feels like it needs a deadline – like, they’re doing something to the scientist, which provides the urgency for the character to take action. Otherwise … I don’t really know what would make this story engaging, other than that the protagonist is 3 times the size of a normal human.

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