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A loyal husband and his wife have a double date with their two best friends. All goes well until the husband’s strong romantic feelings for his best friends’ girlfriend, who happens to be his ex, show up in the middle of the date. TITLE: Double Trouble
"When his feelings for an ex resurfaces on a double date..." Still why would anybody double date their Ex if their history had the potential of resurfacing? "After being forced by his wife to double date an Ex, his feelings for her reappear..." But you risk a passive protagonist with this version, sRead more
“When his feelings for an ex resurfaces on a double date…”
Still why would anybody double date their Ex if their history had the potential of resurfacing?
“After being forced by his wife to double date an Ex, his feelings for her reappear…”
But you risk a passive protagonist with this version, since he is dragged in Act II by his wife
I get a feeling that you kinda get the logline formula..
I’d suggest you post more loglines to see how it goes
Don’t go missing mrmmr
If you don’t believe me, read the crappy loglines most logliners posted in the beginning of their journey here
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When an obsessive archaeologist accidentally releases a near-omnipotent demon, he must impersonate its boisterous, evil overlord to con it back into captivity.
Basically, the kind of situation I?m going for (and this may be yet another script lol) is: Imagine, the most powerful, AI-controlled bomb, set to blow up the planet thinks you?re it?s mommy. It still is set to explode and suggesting otherwise would blow your cover, but you can suggest inconspicuousRead more
Basically, the kind of situation I?m going for (and this may be yet another script lol) is:
Imagine, the most powerful, AI-controlled bomb, set to blow up the planet thinks you?re it?s mommy. It still is set to explode and suggesting otherwise would blow your cover, but you can suggest inconspicuous actions, that include delays, thereby buying your buddies the time to defuse it.
Very basic. There?s more to it, but yeah.
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Re: >>> ... attempt to make their unwaveringly loyal spouses fall in love with each other?I think Richiev's version is good enough.? "Unwavering" is what is? discovered as a consequence of trying to match them up with others.How do you know that someone is "unwavering" about anything?? YouRead more
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>>> … attempt to make their unwaveringly loyal spouses fall in love with each other?
I think Richiev’s version is good enough.? “Unwavering” is what is? discovered as a consequence of trying to match them up with others.
How do you know that someone is “unwavering” about anything?? You know only because you challenge them, tempt them, test their commitment.? You can’t say someone is unwavering until their position or relationship is put to the test.? And that test doesn’t occur until Act 2.? But a logline is about the knowledge the protagonists act upon in the 1st Act, not what they come to realize by Act 3.
If they knew that their spouses were “unwavering” in Act 1, they would have never tried their scheme.? They try their scheme because they don’t know, because they have (flimsy or fanciful) grounds to believe they can pull it off.
fwiw
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