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an incurious uber driver wants to go home finds that his final pickup is a young terrorist with a ticking time bomb. so he use his skills to deliver him before it explodes.
My dark comedy take on this logline: an incurious uber driver wants to go home finds that his final pickup is a young terrorist with a ticking time bomb. so he drives his car to the bank that took his house?to deliver him as a gift.
My dark comedy take on this logline:
an incurious uber driver wants to go home finds that his final pickup is a young terrorist with a ticking time bomb. so he drives his car to the bank that took his house?to deliver him as a gift.
See lessA brilliant young woman-of-science disguises herself as a (male) witch-finder’s assistant so she can undermine the brutal practice of witch burning in spite of a greedy witch-finder who will not pardon any of the town?s witches. A musical comedy
Rather than "Woman of science", just say "A female scientist".And where and when is this set?>>>" who will not pardon any of the town?s witches"In other word's, he's merciless.The logline should frame the plot as a conflict between two people, ?the woman and the male witch-hunter rather thaRead more
Rather than “Woman of science”, just say “A female scientist”.
And where and when is this set?
>>>” who will not pardon any of the town?s witches”
In other word’s, he’s merciless.
The logline should frame the plot as a conflict between two people, ?the woman and the male witch-hunter rather than as a conflict between a woman and the practice of witch burning — and, oh, by the way, the prime instigator of the witch burning is a witch hunter. ?Establish a direct protagonist vs. antagonist relationship.
See lessAfter a childhood encounter with a haunted house, two best friends use their extensive knowledge of all things paranormal to provide enthusiastic, yet extremely unorthodox, investigative services to others experiencing the supernatural, much to the dismay of those they are determined to help.
I like the idea of a paranormal investigator, but it is too similar to Dirk Gently's Holistic Detective Agency (season two about to come out by the way) based on Douglas Adams work. I think the MC needs a more defining characteristic aside from knowing a lot about paranormal things, also maybe makeRead more
I like the idea of a paranormal investigator, but it is too similar to Dirk Gently’s Holistic Detective Agency (season two about to come out by the way) based on Douglas Adams work.
I think the MC needs a more defining characteristic aside from knowing a lot about paranormal things, also maybe make it just one MC instead of two. It also comes across as a bit broad in terms of time line, technically speaking, and according to the logine, their story starts at their childhood and keeps on going into adulthood. I recommend reducing the time span to a more recent event in their lives, such as:
See lessAfter being struck by lighting…
That’s just a cliche suggestion but it illustrates how an event in the now, as apposed to the past, can connect to their actions moving forward.