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After a childhood encounter with a haunted house, two best friends use their extensive knowledge of all things paranormal to provide enthusiastic, yet extremely unorthodox, investigative services to others experiencing the supernatural, much to the dismay of those they are determined to help.
I like the idea of a paranormal investigator, but it is too similar to Dirk Gently's Holistic Detective Agency (season two about to come out by the way) based on Douglas Adams work. I think the MC needs a more defining characteristic aside from knowing a lot about paranormal things, also maybe makeRead more
I like the idea of a paranormal investigator, but it is too similar to Dirk Gently’s Holistic Detective Agency (season two about to come out by the way) based on Douglas Adams work.
I think the MC needs a more defining characteristic aside from knowing a lot about paranormal things, also maybe make it just one MC instead of two. It also comes across as a bit broad in terms of time line, technically speaking, and according to the logine, their story starts at their childhood and keeps on going into adulthood. I recommend reducing the time span to a more recent event in their lives, such as:
See lessAfter being struck by lighting…
That’s just a cliche suggestion but it illustrates how an event in the now, as apposed to the past, can connect to their actions moving forward.
A moody princess meets two men at the edge of forest and takes advantage of their good nature, but one of the men take something else from her.
Hey Logsoflines, Check out the 'Formula' tab on the top bar for more detail on loglines.
Hey Logsoflines,
Check out the ‘Formula’ tab on the top bar for more detail on loglines.
See lessA workaholic midwife becomes pregnant with twins after a drunken one night stand and with the help of her friends adjusts to her new life as a mother.
This sounds like a situation, and no more. Why twins? Does the one night stand figure into the story later? The ending is predictable - adjusting ones life to be a mother because you are pregnant.
This sounds like a situation, and no more. Why twins? Does the one night stand figure into the story later? The ending is predictable – adjusting ones life to be a mother because you are pregnant.
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