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  1. Posted: August 23, 2016In: Comedy

    David, a young aspiring drummer growing up in the 1980s struggles through the challenges of adolescence and finds that friendship, music, and the human spirit are the mightiest weapons of all.

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    Added an answer on August 23, 2016 at 7:46 pm

    The mightiest weapons of all... to combat what exactly? What are the "struggles of adolescence"? As the comments above have stated try to be more specific with your loglines because this is an interesting setting. Whiplash meets Sing Street maybe?

    The mightiest weapons of all… to combat what exactly? What are the “struggles of adolescence”? As the comments above have stated try to be more specific with your loglines because this is an interesting setting.

    Whiplash meets Sing Street maybe?

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  2. Posted: August 19, 2016In: Comedy

    I did jot know where to post this question so I wrote it here. My question was: Is writing a logline same for a short film, feature film and Documentary. Very rudimentary question but I was curious.

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    Added an answer on August 20, 2016 at 1:52 am

    Perhaps, but I don't think it is required or even possible in many cases. ?Whereas loglines are (now) expected in every case for original spec scripts.The purpose of a logline is to sell a script. ?I know we use them here to pitch ideas for scripts, send up trial ballons -- and that's another valuabRead more

    Perhaps, but I don’t think it is required or even possible in many cases. ?Whereas loglines are (now) expected in every case for original spec scripts.

    The purpose of a logline is to sell a script. ?I know we use them here to pitch ideas for scripts, send up trial ballons — and that’s another valuable opportunity the site provides. (A shout out to Karel!) ?But it was originally designed as a promotional tool, to entice producers and directors to read a finished script.

    Now, I realize ?that for historical documentaries, ?a script may be written before any video is shot. ?I’ve amassed a pile of documentation for an historical drama set between 1908 and 1920. ? Enough enough to do a documentary. ?And in both cases, I would use the same logline. Because the story is done and finished — I know how it ends. ?It’s ?essentially the same “plot”.?

    But in documentaries for a current ongoing events, you don’t know how it’s going to end. ?You may not even have identified a protagonist, a ?person around whom you will frame a narrative.

    A logline is a concise description of a plot. ? And the formal definition of a plot, per Aristotle in the “Poetics”, is an imitation of action, ?a mimicry of real life. ? Which he differentiated from ?histories — the “written documentaries” of his day. ? ?Aristotle said dramatic stories need a plot to succeed whereas histories don’t.?

    ?Although documentaries must, of necessity, edit reality, they are supposed ?to make a good faith effort to ?conform to known?facts. ?Plot is under no such obligation; it’s has the freedom to bend, wantonly ignore the facts, or make up fictions to fit it’s dramatic purpose.?

    Shakespeare’s “Richard III” is a fabulous — and fabulist –historical drama. ?It distorts events and warps characters for the purpose of its plot. ?A documentary of Richard III, faithful to the known historical facts, ?would present a different story, a different portrait.

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  3. Posted: August 9, 2016In: Comedy

    A young man named Abdelhafid who suffers from personality disorder starts a show where he will go on exposing a woman who cheated on her husband , but after one of his personalities expose the case , another personality takes over and starts its own show where they expose the other shows

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    Added an answer on August 10, 2016 at 2:25 pm

    If your goal is to comment on how cheap run-of-the-mill reality shows exploit people, I believe the premise needs work. As the others have noted, the plot is unclear and the concept vague. However the subject matter can be interesting, try to distill your character and actions down to a clear goal aRead more

    If your goal is to comment on how cheap run-of-the-mill reality shows exploit people, I believe the premise needs work.

    As the others have noted, the plot is unclear and the concept vague. However the subject matter can be interesting, try to distill your character and actions down to a clear goal and motivation combo.

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