1. Posted: May 22, 2016In:

    When a teenager and his best friend get his father fired they must help him find a job even though he has 2 skills (watching tv and eating)

    dpg Singularity

    I think there is a potentially interesting story to tell here, but I'm not sure what the point is of this one -- the theme. What idea does the writer wish to explore? ?Theme is external to the content of a logline -- but it implicitly shapes it as it is an integral part of the story proper, or oughtRead more

    I think there is a potentially interesting story to tell here, but I’m not sure what the point is of this one — the theme. What idea does the writer wish to explore? ?Theme is external to the content of a logline — but it implicitly shapes it as it is an integral part of the story proper, or ought to be. ?What is the point of this concept other than to use the father as a comic foil, to play him for a fool?

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  2. Posted: March 27, 2016In:

    A homophobic singer must race against time to find his estranged doctor when he wakes up in a female’s voice before his next concert.

    tigereyestudios Penpusher

    I would watch this movie, but why does he need this certain doctor? Other than that go on Kickstarter and make a movie man.

    I would watch this movie, but why does he need this certain doctor? Other than that go on Kickstarter and make a movie man.

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  3. Posted: May 1, 2016In:

    The highest graded kid in the class dies in a drug overdose. Two kids, one kid is a redneck christian who believes God gave him knowledge even though he’s not very smart and another one is an emo columbine kid who is also not very smart wants this to feel validation. They now cheat tests,.

    tigereyestudios Penpusher

    I don't understand what the first part has to do with the second part or why the kids death is so important.

    I don’t understand what the first part has to do with the second part or why the kids death is so important.

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