1. Posted: October 11, 2015In:

    After his father goes to jail a naive television executive deliberately produces the worst possible shows in order to drop the ratings and prevent his father’s network from being taken over, but the shows he produces become a huge success and he is made to continue making them.

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    Thanks for the ideas guys. How about this as an update: When an evil corporation threatens to buy out his father's television network, an executive deliberately produces the worst shows to drop the ratings and prevent the take over. But the new shows rate through the roof.

    Thanks for the ideas guys.

    How about this as an update:

    When an evil corporation threatens to buy out his father’s television network, an executive deliberately produces the worst shows to drop the ratings and prevent the take over. But the new shows rate through the roof.

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  2. Posted: October 15, 2015In:

    When her disapproving friends conspire to end her pregnancy to a straight man, a cocksure lesbian must go to any extreme to keep the baby.

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    Unless this is a story set in?a stone age culture?( like decades ago when such pregnancies would have been controversial, verboten)? ?I don't see what the? potential for the concept is.? In the context of more tolerant times, hasn't it become a non-issue?? Why do?her friends?believe they must?take aRead more

    Unless this is a story set in?a stone age culture?( like decades ago when such pregnancies would have been controversial, verboten)? ?I don’t see what the? potential for the concept is.? In the context of more tolerant times, hasn’t it become a non-issue??

    Why do?her friends?believe they must?take away her?baby?? Just because she’s headstrong? That would seem to be?a character strength in this situation; she’s a determined woman.

    fwiw

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  3. Posted: September 25, 2015In:

    The most famous serial killer of the year has gotten very lonely. Wishing to have a friend who would accept him, joins a support group with very different and grotesque addicted people. One of those people is an overworked Agent who is part of a case to catch the most famous serial killer of the year.

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    I think the main character needs a clear end-goal. As it is now, the only goal presented in the logline is "to find a friend", but as far as I understand it, he finds that early on in the movie (when he joins the group). He also needs a main action, something he must do to reach his goal. Maybe he nRead more

    I think the main character needs a clear end-goal. As it is now, the only goal presented in the logline is “to find a friend”, but as far as I understand it, he finds that early on in the movie (when he joins the group). He also needs a main action, something he must do to reach his goal. Maybe he needs to cover his tracks before before the Agent finds out he is the killer, in order to keep him/her as his friend?

    Also, this logline could be boiled down to a shorter one. Including the main action and the goal, maybe something more like this:
    “When a lonly serial killer joins a support group and take intrest in an other member, an overworked agent who is assigned to solve the murders he commited, he must cover his tracks before she finds out he is guilty in order to keep her as a friend.”

    Hope this helped 🙂

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