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When a washed-up championship cowboy, reduced to shilling for a huge conglomerate, discovers its championship racehorse is being doped on drugs, he steals the horse to liberate it from commercial exploitation.
Unfortunately, I missed this post. But I'm happy reading it now. Like the premise and your logline pitches a great story. To be honest, I didn't know this movie. Not my times, but I will check it out. Thanks :) Also, it's crazy, like you said: they started the project without having the full story.Read more
Unfortunately, I missed this post.
See lessBut I’m happy reading it now.
Like the premise and your logline pitches a great story.
To be honest, I didn’t know this movie. Not my times, but I will check it out. Thanks 🙂
Also, it’s crazy, like you said: they started the project without having the full story. This says something about the power of a fantastic premise.
Fonda and Redford? What a duo!
An Ex-CIA interrogator with a new life as an acupuncturist must survive Public Enemy No. 1 when her interpretive healing accidentally goes viral and exposes her government-subsidized hideout.
I notice you categorized it as a comedy. Hmm. It reads more like drama to me. I'm stating this as if I had not read any of the thread of discussion, as if I know nothing about the story other than the 28 words in the logline. What's the funny in the logline itself, the 28 words, that I'm not seRead more
I notice you categorized it as a comedy. Hmm. It reads more like drama to me. I’m stating this as if I had not read any of the thread of discussion, as if I know nothing about the story other than the 28 words in the logline. What’s the funny in the logline itself, the 28 words, that I’m not seeing?
Why is the bad guy coming after her? She’s small fish in the CIA pond. Or to mix and mangle metaphors, she’s merely a pawn in the Big Chess Game of geopolitics. Did her job as an interrogator entail torturing? If so, that needs to be in the logline because it explains the bad guy’s motivation for coming after her.
Why is she at the top of his personal sh*t list?
And her objective goal needs to be specific, concrete. Not merely surviving her attacker or healing whoever. The fact that a bad guy is coming after her seems to entails a ghost from the past coming back to haunt and kill her in the present. She must need to bring closure to some unfinished spook business, rectify a wrong done. Whatever.Â
An obvious ironical theme might be that she needs to heal a wound in her past before she can heal clients in the present. (And heal herself.) That could be interesting.
>>>government-subsidized hideout.
Not the way it’s done. I say that having known a number of retired spooks. Ex-spooks can and do boot up whole new careers with their generous retirement package. Just saying.
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See lessWhen a group of vigilante paedophile hunters attempt to capture their latest target, they discover the limitations of their unprofessional crusade.
This sounds great. However consider that it's already understood that they're 'unprofessional' by virtue of them being vigilantes. Maybe they 'find themselves trapped in a world of..' or 'meet their match in the criminal underworld..' or something like that.
This sounds great. However consider that it’s already understood that they’re ‘unprofessional’ by virtue of them being vigilantes.
Maybe they ‘find themselves trapped in a world of..’ or ‘meet their match in the criminal underworld..’ or something like that.
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