1. Posted: June 29, 2020In:

    After an actual demon possesses his wife during rehearsals for a stage version of The Exorcist, a spineless director must fight his demonic spouse to save the cast and crew.

    Neer Shelter Singularity

    This is a logline for a mockumentary (fake documentary) I'm currently writing - it's aimed at being a contained horror-comedy.

    This is a logline for a mockumentary (fake documentary) I’m currently writing – it’s aimed at being a contained horror-comedy.

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  2. Posted: June 18, 2020In:

    Four mentally ill college students must race against time to stop their professor from being murdered by a mob boss.

    Richiev Singularity

    There are definitely elements here, but you have left out the inciting incident. Why is the Mob boss going to kill their professor?

    There are definitely elements here, but you have left out the inciting incident. Why is the Mob boss going to kill their professor?

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  3. Posted: June 4, 2019In: , ,

    When a washed-up championship cowboy, reduced to shilling for a huge conglomerate, discovers its championship racehorse is being doped on drugs, he steals the horse to liberate it from commercial exploitation.

    savinh0 Samurai

    Unfortunately, I missed this post. But I'm happy reading it now. Like the premise and your logline pitches a great story. To be honest, I didn't know this movie. Not my times, but I will check it out. Thanks :) Also, it's crazy, like you said: they started the project without having the full story.Read more

    Unfortunately, I missed this post.
    But I’m happy reading it now.
    Like the premise and your logline pitches a great story.
    To be honest, I didn’t know this movie. Not my times, but I will check it out. Thanks 🙂
    Also, it’s crazy, like you said: they started the project without having the full story. This says something about the power of a fantastic premise.
    Fonda and Redford? What a duo!

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