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  1. Posted: May 7, 2019In: Comedy

    Halloween decorations only in October, no flowers in the parkway ? clearly the neighborhood HOA has become tyrannical. A group of moms plot a takeover during their weekly bunco night, and the only thing in their way is the idiot president and his old white guy friends.

    Ckharper Samurai
    Added an answer on May 10, 2019 at 5:49 pm

    Here?s a another (serious) take after taking heavily from Richiev- ?When the HOA president inflicts draconian rules on the neighborhood, a fed-up mom and her friends plot a coup to takeover the HOA. They conspire under cover of darkness ? at their weekly bunco nights.? Title: Bunco Night First senteRead more

    Here?s a another (serious) take after taking heavily from Richiev-

    ?When the HOA president inflicts draconian rules on the neighborhood, a fed-up mom and her friends plot a coup to takeover the HOA. They conspire under cover of darkness ? at their weekly bunco nights.?

    Title: Bunco Night

    First sentence could hang on its own at 23 words.
    Second sentence feels optional (11 words) but I like setting up the title and adding a bit more comedy.

    Anyhow, gives me a good footing to actually take a spin at developing. Thanks all!

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  2. Posted: May 3, 2019In: Comedy

    After a graduate student is asked to identify a body?his pot-dealer?s, he enlists the help of two other clients to give the man a proper burial.

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    Added an answer on May 4, 2019 at 6:48 am

    Try a logline for each possibility as writing the thoughts is the only way forward. Since you don't have the answer as to what was in the envelope, consider that the story doesn't answer it, either. It could be a McGuffin or running joke or...

    Try a logline for each possibility as writing the thoughts is the only way forward.

    Since you don’t have the answer as to what was in the envelope, consider that the story doesn’t answer it, either. It could be a McGuffin or running joke or…

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  3. Posted: April 25, 2019In: Comedy

    A reformed sex addict, suffering intimacy problems with a woman who offers him stability, returns to his former psychiatrist, a twisted and manipulative woman for whom he might still be madly in love with.

    thedarkhorse Samurai
    Added an answer on May 2, 2019 at 9:34 pm

    What?s wrong with a schmuck as a protagonist? Ha.Well - he?s a rich, playboy plastic surgeon in the Patrick Bateman and Christian Troy vein. He?s a smug yuppie type - with OCD levels of perfectionism. He?s supposed to be pathetic and ridiculous.?There?s even a scene where (in a nod to Close EncounteRead more

    What?s wrong with a schmuck as a protagonist? Ha.

    Well – he?s a rich, playboy plastic surgeon in the Patrick Bateman and Christian Troy vein. He?s a smug yuppie type – with OCD levels of perfectionism. He?s supposed to be pathetic and ridiculous.?There?s even a scene where (in a nod to Close Encounters) he starts carving a naked women into his mashed potatoes. He?s obsessed.

    In a lot of ways he can go head-to-head with the psychiatrist, who is (you guessed it, also a former sex addict). What they have together is unique – they get and understand each other. They can only be vulnerable with each other (which is oddly corny for such a black premise).

    What?s interesting and dangerous about them having an affair – is that it?s illegal and unethical to do that with your patient. But yeah – I mostly imagined two beautiful people with huge egos going head to head in a game of constantly shifting power fuelled somewhat by sexual jealousy. The ending for it being – these two cruel, narcissistic people do very much belong to each other. There is someone out there for everyone ha.

    Okay. Cheers everyone.

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