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After being fired from drinking on the job, a disc jockey teams up with a party planner to help him get sober and to help him with next gig.
Hi tony18, An alcoholic DJ who has lost his last gig asks a party planner to help him sober up and get his life under control. Is this what you are trying to say in your logline? Whether your answer is yes or no, click on the "FORMULA" icon at the top of this page and study the content a few times.Read more
Hi tony18,
An alcoholic DJ who has lost his last gig asks a party planner to help him sober up and get his life under control.
Is this what you are trying to say in your logline? Whether your answer is yes or no, click on the “FORMULA” icon at the top of this page and study the content a few times. This will help you in constructing your loglines.
Good Luck
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Hi pickerman123, How about: A deep delve into THORTON T's television network and its most offensive tv show. I hope this helps
Hi pickerman123,
How about:
A deep delve into THORTON T’s television network and its most offensive tv show.
I hope this helps
See lessTo make his life-long dream of becoming a detective a reality, an impulsive and excitable cop must escort a convict on his “Dead Man’s Day”, a day of chaperoned freedom for death row inmates before their execution. His calculated ward, though, will stop at nothing to avenge the man he was framed for killing.
Hi phatiusmcdoogal, Below is my understanding of your proposed logline: However, there are parts that are not clear (in terms of conflict). Is this close to what you are trying to say? To consolidate his position as a homicide detective, a sharp-witted cop must escort (escort where? from what? Why dRead more
Hi phatiusmcdoogal,
Below is my understanding of your proposed logline:
However, there are parts that are not clear (in terms of conflict).
Is this close to what you are trying to say?
To consolidate his position as a homicide detective, a sharp-witted cop must escort (escort where? from what? Why does the convict need escorting?) a death row inmate while his (calculated ward? What is that?) prosecutors are determined to avenge a man they claim he killed.
I hope this helps
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