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  1. Posted: January 11, 2016In: Family

    A disgraced coach gets a second chance but must teach couch potato kids about baseball and life to win a championship trophy, a trophy wife, and the apple of his eye.

    RandyG Logliner
    Added an answer on January 14, 2016 at 1:05 pm

    Aren't you giving away the ending??? Maybe say "as he pursues" or "in pursuit of" a championship trophy, etc.

    Aren’t you giving away the ending??? Maybe say “as he pursues” or “in pursuit of” a championship trophy, etc.

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  2. Posted: November 23, 2015In: Family

    When tragedy strikes her son, a lost Angel who relinquished immortality to reconnect with the true meaning of love must find the God she abandoned to save his life.

    dpg Singularity
    Added an answer on November 25, 2015 at 8:25 am

    Since when did angels acquire the free will agency to opt out of immortality?? And isn't another term for a "lost angel" is a demon? Because that's what Satan (aka the archangel Lucifer before he opted out) and his crew became after they abandoned fealty to God? ?Angels operating undercover on earthRead more

    Since when did angels acquire the free will agency to opt out of immortality?? And isn’t another term for a “lost angel” is a demon? Because that’s what Satan (aka the archangel Lucifer before he opted out) and his crew became after they abandoned fealty to God? ?

    Angels operating undercover on earth — yes that’s? valid (per scripture) and oft used narrative device. ?But, I, for one, find the premise for a “lost Angel” is difficult to wrap my head around? and suspend disbelief in.?? Others’ mileage may vary.

    The story is targeted to a Christian audience.? Maybe they will sympathize with a fallen angel trying to redeem herself as much or more than a fallen female attempting likewise.

    Whatever, I suggest that the tragedy should be spelled out.? Is her son dying from an accident, an incurable disease? And shouldn’t more be at stake than the life of the son?? After all, if he dies, isn’t he going to heaven?? So in the grander scheme, what’s there to? lament about him?? Isn’t the bigger problem, the ultimate stakes, the “lost angel’s” immortal prospects, or lack thereof?

    fwiw

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  3. Posted: September 28, 2015In: 01, Family

    Thwarting constant deportation attempts while managing daily household affairs, a young illegal immigrant girl musters precocious wits to win her school the national academic games championship

    Jean-Marie Mazaleyrat Logliner
    Added an answer on October 1, 2015 at 9:30 pm

    The opening scene shows Chubby Wubby given the gold medal at the ceremony of Academic Games, then the second scene opens on the wake up, so?the ceremony could a dream... Chubby Wubby is ?a?10?years old girl. By the way, I didn't found how to enter?the tilte of the story. Thanks. JM

    The opening scene shows Chubby Wubby given the gold medal at the ceremony of Academic Games, then the second scene opens on the wake up, so?the ceremony could a dream…

    Chubby Wubby is ?a?10?years old girl.

    By the way, I didn’t found how to enter?the tilte of the story.

    Thanks.

    JM

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