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  1. Posted: August 17, 2016In: War

    A Russian Orthodox farmer torches his home and leaves with his dog hours before Operation Barbarossa and the Nazis invade Russia.

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    dpg Singularity
    Added an answer on August 18, 2016 at 10:18 am

    Since Stalin was caught completely off guard by the Nazi invasion ?on June 22, 1941 in spite of warnings from his own intelligence services, ?is the farmer's "scorched earth" act and flight coincidental or did he have some premonition that the invasion was about to occur? ? What is the ?cause and efRead more

    Since Stalin was caught completely off guard by the Nazi invasion ?on June 22, 1941 in spite of warnings from his own intelligence services, ?is the farmer’s “scorched earth” act and flight coincidental or did he have some premonition that the invasion was about to occur? ? What is the ?cause and effect relationship between the invasion and his flight? ?Why did he torch his home and leave?

    And then what? ?Where is he headed? What becomes his objective goal, his destination?

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  2. Posted: June 2, 2016In: War

    Inflicted with PTSD from a young age, a mute street performer is abandoned by his troupe as France becomes occupied by the Nazi Wehrmacht. Faced with the choice to escape to neutral Switzerland or fight, he joins the French Resistance as a code-breaker and infiltrates the Nazi regime. His tactics shift when he learns what?s happening to the countless civilians going missing.

    dpg Singularity
    Added an answer on June 7, 2016 at 9:38 pm

    Yes, indeed. ?If there is an one iron law of drama it is that there must be unity of action. ?And the nature of that unified action is a function of the objective goal of the protagonist.

    Yes, indeed. ?If there is an one iron law of drama it is that there must be unity of action. ?And the nature of that unified action is a function of the objective goal of the protagonist.

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  3. Posted: June 1, 2016In: War

    A mute street performer with PTSD, trapped and on the run in war-torn Europe, must use his wits and talents, and enlist the help of the French Resistance, to change the course of the second World War.

    DylanK Logliner
    Added an answer on June 6, 2016 at 12:47 pm

    Both the new log line and the original give the impression this is a big story with lots of moving parts. ?But at it's heart this feels like a story about a mute guy trying to tell people about concentration camps. ?I think if you focus on that you'll hook your audience and get your message across.

    Both the new log line and the original give the impression this is a big story with lots of moving parts. ?But at it’s heart this feels like a story about a mute guy trying to tell people about concentration camps. ?I think if you focus on that you’ll hook your audience and get your message across.

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