Genre: TVPOD

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  1. Posted: June 28, 2020In:

    When a pie-maker with the ability to bring people back from the dead, revives his child-hood sweetheart, he and his detective side kick work to find her killer before the killer strikes again.

    Nicholas Andrew Halls Samurai

    I think you've nailed the engine of the show. But seeing it written down like that, it's hard to imagine how that story is going to play out over multiple episodes/seasons. Also, it's missing the irony that kind of hooked me on the concept, ie. he can't touch the love of his life or she'll be dead aRead more

    I think you’ve nailed the engine of the show.

    But seeing it written down like that, it’s hard to imagine how that story is going to play out over multiple episodes/seasons.

    Also, it’s missing the irony that kind of hooked me on the concept, ie. he can’t touch the love of his life or she’ll be dead again. They’re reunited, but can never physically express their love. I wonder if there is some way of including that in the logline, or whether, with everything else going on, it’ll just end up feeling like a hat-on-a-hat.

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  2. Posted: June 28, 2020In:

    When corporate threatens their branch with downsizing, a clueless office manager protects his quirky staff from the news by operating as though nothing has changed.

    OKBoomer Penpusher
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    Is this the logline for an episode or for a season? It is hard to imagine that the office manager could keep this quiet for more than a few episodes.

    Is this the logline for an episode or for a season? It is hard to imagine that the office manager could keep this quiet for more than a few episodes.

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  3. Posted: June 28, 2020In:

    When conscripted into a brutal war, a team of army doctors must use laughter to stave off their own insanity, in order to save as many lives as they can.

    Shane Walsh-Smith Penpusher
    This answer was edited.

    I think on reflection I'd make this specifically about the Hawkeye character, perhaps framing him as angry or self-righteous, or hedonistic. Maybe impulse-driven.

    I think on reflection I’d make this specifically about the Hawkeye character, perhaps framing him as angry or self-righteous, or hedonistic. Maybe impulse-driven.

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