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N.J.RobinsPenpusher
Posted: July 28, 20222022-07-28T15:15:25+10:00 2022-07-28T15:15:25+10:00In: Family

An African American lawyer takes in three of his kids after their mother passed away, but they soon discovered that he’s engaged with a Caucasian woman who has three kids of her own.

An African American lawyer takes in three of his kids after their mother passed away, but they soon discovered that he’s engaged with a Caucasian woman who has three kids of her own.
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    1. stef7sa Penpusher
      2022-07-29T04:51:03+10:00Added an answer on July 29, 2022 at 4:51 am

      Interesting start, but what’s the conflict here? What does the protagonist want and who is trying to prevent him from getting it? Make it more explicit.

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      • N.J.Robins Penpusher
        2022-07-29T08:58:21+10:00Replied to answer on July 29, 2022 at 8:58 am

        Actually, It’s more like The Brady Bunch meets Diff’rent Strokes.

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