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Posted: April 22, 20222022-04-22T00:02:32+10:00 2022-04-22T00:02:32+10:00In: Thriller

A bizarre explosion forces a slick counterterrorism agent to confront his beliefs about the universe in order to stop a cult from unleashing ancient gods on the modern world.

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    1. JTDallas Penpusher
      2022-04-22T01:47:24+10:00Added an answer on April 22, 2022 at 1:47 am

      While I could see this film piquing my interest, two things stand out to me in the logline: the use of the word “bizarre,” and “confront his beliefs about the universe.” What is bizarre about the explosion? Would that take too long to explain or could word choice be more succinct? And what about his beliefs needs confronting? Is he baffled? Is it his understanding of reality?

      A mysterious explosion forces a slick counterterrorism agent to come face to face with a new reality in order to stop a cult from unleashing ancient gods on the modern world.

      Just a tweak, maybe?

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      • FrankFedora Penpusher
        2022-04-22T03:06:11+10:00Replied to answer on April 22, 2022 at 3:06 am

        Thanks for the feedback! The idea is that the explosion (maybe a power plant or nuclear facility) shouldn’t have happened due to safety checks and redundancy but a chain of events happened in just the right order against incredible odds. Mysterious works very well. I like new reality very much!

        A slick counterterrorism agent investigating a mysterious explosion faces a new reality and must stop a cult from unleashing ancient gods on the modern world.

        A tweak on a tweak?

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    2. atemu Penpusher
      2022-04-23T01:11:40+10:00Added an answer on April 23, 2022 at 1:11 am

      A sauve counterintelligence officer struggles to discover the location of the unknown cult that threatens to unleash a powerful ancient demon on humanity.

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