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Posted: 2018-04-07T10:08:13+10:00 In:

A devious and successful career Mum is forced to confront her prejudices as her transgender son and her Swedish aupair gang up to provide the requested sumptuous banquet for her terribly important dinner guests..

A devious and successful career Mum is forced to confront her prejudices as her transgender son and her Swedish aupair gang up to provide the requested sumptuous banquet for her terribly important dinner guests..
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    2 Reviews

    1. Singularity

      Who is the protagonist?? That is, who is in the driver’s seat of the story, the mum or the transgender son ?? Seems to me that the son is the more proactive character, the mother the reacting one.? ?Whoever is the more proactive character is the protagonist and the logline should lead off and be framed in terms of that character.

      fwiw

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    2. Penpusher

      I’m not great at loglines, but for regular people I think this is quite a mouthful, the constant descriptive words kind of make it hard to visualize the story. Nice work tho.

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