A disgraced cop, offered the chance to regain custody of his son unearths a hidden layer of secrets of those involved within and outside the law when he must catch a serial killer before more children die.
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A disgraced cop, offered the chance to regain custody of his son unearths a hidden layer of secrets of those involved within and outside the law when he must catch a serial killer before more children die.
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“Despite risk of becoming the scapegoat of a corrupt police force, an honest cop commits unwarranted intervention against a child killer thus hindering his chance of regaining custody of his son.”