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mobiuswestPenpusher
Posted: October 15, 20212021-10-15T13:09:31+10:00 2021-10-15T13:09:31+10:00In: Crime

A disgraced ex-cop, offered the chance to regain custody of his son must partner with a soon to retire ex-prosecutor to catch a serial killer before he kills more children, digging for the truth they unearth a hidden layer of personal and professional secrets of those involved from within and outside the law.

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      2021-11-01T03:00:59+10:00Added an answer on November 1, 2021 at 3:00 am

      I like this logline a lot but seems it has several plots and not sure which one is the main one. Let’s try simplifying it.

      A disgraced ex-cop [CHARACTTER], offered the chance to regain custody of his son must [ACTION/GOAL] partner with a soon to retire ex-prosecutor [CHARACTTER] to catch a serial killer before he kills more children [ACTION/GOAL], digging for the truth they unearth a hidden layer of personal and professional secrets of those involved from within and outside the law [ACTION/GOAL].

      Maybe something like

      “A strait-laced prosecutor has to partner up with the disgraced ex-cop who he got fired in order to save his kidnapped son from a serial killer.”

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    2. mobiuswest Penpusher
      2021-11-03T15:53:40+10:00Added an answer on November 3, 2021 at 3:53 pm

      I agree it always felt a little convoluted to me, thank you for the advice!

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