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ChristopherPenpusher
Posted: November 30, 20162016-11-30T15:20:05+10:00 2016-11-30T15:20:05+10:00In: Noir

A domesticated soldier must rekindle her killer instinct by a suicidal Drill Sergeant in order to assassinate her drug trafficking ex-husband before he’s elected President.

A domesticated soldier must rekindle her killer instinct by a suicidal Drill Sergeant in order to assassinate her drug trafficking ex-husband before he’s elected President.
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    1. dpg Singularity
      2016-12-01T02:56:10+10:00Added an answer on December 1, 2016 at 2:56 am

      Truth is stranger than fiction. ?I am afraid that current events have created a political situation in the U.S. that eclipses this logline ?and ?just about any fictional story about a most improbable ?and unqualified Presidential candidate.

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    2. Dkpough1 Uberwriter
      2016-12-01T08:29:29+10:00Added an answer on December 1, 2016 at 8:29 am

      “A domesticated soldier must rekindle her killer instinct by a suicidal Drill Sergeant in order to assassinate her drug trafficking ex-husband before he?s elected President.”

      I think the wording is weird. “by a suicidal Drill Sergeant” is a bit vague. What must she actually do? Return to boot camp? Go on a mission?

      While the election does bare a resemblance to the situation in the logline, I don’t think it really affects it. After all, the story isn’t about the election, it’s about a woman doing everything she can do stop the election of a criminal.?
      I hope this helps.?

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    3. Roberto Alto Logliner
      2017-08-28T14:32:28+10:00Added an answer on August 28, 2017 at 2:32 pm

      It sounds intriguing, but too much information. If you could only describe each person with one adjective describing good, moderate, or bad behavior , how would you do this? This is a good excercise to get at the core of power dynamics.

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