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Posted: August 2, 20192019-08-02T04:11:08+10:00 2019-08-02T04:11:08+10:00In: Crime

A girl was murdered and the investigator and her friends are trying to find the murderer but their hidden secrets stand in their way from finding the truth

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    1. deborah_b Logliner
      2019-08-02T13:17:13+10:00Added an answer on August 2, 2019 at 1:17 pm

      How about:

      When the body of a girl turns up [in some unique and specific way/place], her friends must put aside their differences/resolve old conflicts/confront hidden truths to get to the bottom of murder before someone else is murdered/something else terrible happens.

      You could also add a midpoint reversal:

      When the body of a girl turns up [in some unique and specific way/place], her friends turn on each other; but when a second body is found, they must put aside their differences/resolve old conflicts/confront hidden truths to uncover the murderer.

      Love a good crime story!

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