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IvyEight6Penpusher
Posted: September 8, 20202020-09-08T17:01:54+10:00 2020-09-08T17:01:54+10:00In: Action

A group of filmmakers decide to make short films about robots, outer space and talking cats.

Revenge of the Cat Robots – an anthology film

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      Odie Samurai
      2020-09-09T04:07:48+10:00Added an answer on September 9, 2020 at 4:07 am

      Ok… but for me to sit 90 minutes watching:
      First, what prompted the group to do this e.g. “To pass their LA film school final, a group…”.
      Second, what about adding some obstacles e.g. “…, a group of novice filmmakers must overcome their egos to create short films about robots, outer space, and talking cats…”.
      Last, a teaser of some kind e.g. “… outer space, and talking cats, but things get real when one of the students reveals a love affair with their alien cat abductors”

      Take care.

      P.s. From your similar posts and responses, I hope to God “IvyEight6” is not some social engineered BOT created by Karel to drum up the logline numbers – joking, but… 😉

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      • Karel Segers Samurai
        2020-09-12T06:55:31+10:00Replied to answer on September 12, 2020 at 6:55 am

        Clearly I don’t need any bots to achieve that. 😉

        BTW – I’d like to take the opportunity to thank you for all your reviews, Odie. You’ve been wonderful!

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        • IvyEight6 Penpusher
          2020-09-12T11:10:15+10:00Replied to answer on September 12, 2020 at 11:10 am

          So, you’re banning me.

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    2. IvyEight6 Penpusher
      2020-09-09T05:46:20+10:00Added an answer on September 9, 2020 at 5:46 am

      What do you mean about Karel?

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      • Odie Samurai
        2020-09-09T09:14:18+10:00Replied to answer on September 9, 2020 at 9:14 am

        Karel Segers – the creator of this site [logline.it], – was a bad joke about getting more loglines to push up the counter on the top right of this site.

        So… can you reply with another draft based on my examples below? If not that’s cool.

        Take care.

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        • IvyEight6 Penpusher
          2020-09-09T09:22:54+10:00Replied to answer on September 9, 2020 at 9:22 am

          Wait. It’s my fault.

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