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HarrasPenpusher
Posted: June 12, 20192019-06-12T09:12:42+10:00 2019-06-12T09:12:42+10:00In: Comedy

A group therapy each of them for a different self control problem decide to take revenge after hearing the new member story.

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      Mike Pedley Singularity
      2019-06-12T20:01:57+10:00Added an answer on June 12, 2019 at 8:01 pm

      This doesn’t read properly. I’m confused as to what the story is actually about. Check out the “Our formula” tab for help with formatting.

      My questions that I have currently:

        1. Who’s the protagonist?
        2. Who is getting revenge against who and how?
        3. How is this a comedy?

      Once this logline is in a more conventional format, and at the very least provides answers to 1 & 2 above, it will be easier to offer more feedback.

      Fwiw, I do like what I think is the idea behind this. I need more information to understand it better though.

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