Penpusher
Posted: 2022-12-23T10:00:00+10:00 In:

A housewife and her estranged father mixed up in killing a loan shark struggle to escape both the police hunting them and a brothers vengeance to save the innocent members of their family.

A housewife and her estranged father mixed up in killing a loan shark struggle to escape both the police hunting them and a brothers vengeance to save the innocent members of their family.
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    1. Penpusher

      Not too bad — the main issue I think is in regards to the logic of the goal.. as in, why are they needing to save the innocent members of their family? Also – ‘mixed up’ is a bit vague, as is the Brother’s need for vengeance..?

      ‘A bored housewife finds herself on the run from the law after killing a loan shark to protect her estranged father-in-law’

      ?

      Best of luck 🙂

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