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Posted: 2013-08-30T13:07:25+10:00

A hypochondriac young man delights in getting an internship with America's favorite talk-show neuro-scientist/psychiatrist — until the good doctor goes berserk and the young man becomes his only link back to sanity…

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    1. Samurai

      Drop “young man” – it’s superfluous.

      “When a (character flaw?) hypochondriac is offered an internship with America’s favourite talk-show psychiatrist, he (what action does he take – and what is his goal?)”

      The stakes; his mentor’s sanity, is relatively clear from your logline above, but the important details of goal and action are missing.

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    2. Singularity

      What nicholsandrewhalls said. The inciting incident seems to be that the TV shrink goes beserk. Now what must the hypochondriac do?

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