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variableUberwriter
Posted: March 11, 20182018-03-11T20:32:27+10:00 2018-03-11T20:32:27+10:00In: Thriller

A mother finds solace in her dead kid’s unfinished comic book, only to discover it “leading” to his possible murder.

The dead teenager was a wannabe detective who learned something he shouldn’t have…
He unknowingly captured some “detail prior to his murder” in his comicbook which would lead her to his killers

The title of his unfinished comic book could also be the title of this film.

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    1. dpg Singularity
      2018-03-12T01:13:16+10:00Added an answer on March 12, 2018 at 1:13 am

      When a grieving mother discovers clues to her teenager’s murder in his unfinished graphic novel, she….

      Well, what does she do about the discovery?? ?The setup is a good one, but the logline needs a follow through of the action that results from the discovery.

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