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Posted: August 23, 20192019-08-23T23:39:52+10:00 2019-08-23T23:39:52+10:00In: Thriller

A na?ve but gifted young paralegal working late finds herself trapped in an empty giant parking garage and must defend herself against the shadowy contract killer hired to kill her.

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    1. Mike Pedley Singularity
      2019-08-24T00:00:16+10:00Added an answer on August 24, 2019 at 12:00 am

      Why is the fact that she’s a paralegal relevant? Or the fact that she’s gifted? Or naive for that matter? These things should give me some clue as to why someone would go to the length of hiring an assassin to kill her. Or at least suggest how she is going to be able to survive this encounter.

      Surely, a contract killer would just shoot her from a distance? This is what they does for a living right? She’s just a naive paralegal… so how is she supposed to defend herself against someone who kills people like this every day?

      Is this for a feature length or a short? At the moment I’m struggling to see this sustaining a 90mins+ runtime.

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