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Tomisin AtobateleLogliner
A public defender doubles as a private dominatrix to support her family, but when a lonely, corrupt judge finds out she must sexually and emotionally satisfy a man with the power to ruin her life.
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An interesting setup. But,.. what’s her dramatic problem?? As long as she gives him what he wants — no problem, right?
Further if he avails himself of her kinky services, then she can blackmail or expose him.?? She likewise can ruin his life.
So as I was saying, what’s her dramatic problem?
Also, the logline overlooks the most interesting aspect, the story hook:? their relationship.? In the courtroom, he dominates her.? In the backroom, she dominates him.
remove ‘lonely’ and it might work better
Fantastic premise. So much potential but if she is a dominatrix why would she be averse to dominating the judge?