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Tomisin AtobateleLogliner
Posted: March 3, 20202020-03-03T01:45:48+10:00 2020-03-03T01:45:48+10:00In: Drama

A public defender doubles as a private dominatrix to support her family, but when a lonely, corrupt judge finds out she must sexually and emotionally satisfy a man with the power to ruin her life.

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    1. dpg Singularity
      2020-03-03T02:32:33+10:00Added an answer on March 3, 2020 at 2:32 am

      An interesting setup. But,.. what’s her dramatic problem?? As long as she gives him what he wants — no problem, right?

      Further if he avails himself of her kinky services, then she can blackmail or expose him.?? She likewise can ruin his life.

      So as I was saying, what’s her dramatic problem?

      Also, the logline overlooks the most interesting aspect, the story hook:? their relationship.? In the courtroom, he dominates her.? In the backroom, she dominates him.

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    2. variable Uberwriter
      2020-03-03T04:03:41+10:00Added an answer on March 3, 2020 at 4:03 am

      remove ‘lonely’ and it might work better

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    3. OlDustyDogg Logliner
      2020-03-12T13:01:50+10:00Added an answer on March 12, 2020 at 1:01 pm

      Fantastic premise. So much potential but if she is a dominatrix why would she be averse to dominating the judge?

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