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MadiRmePenpusher
Posted: September 7, 20202020-09-07T23:21:08+10:00 2020-09-07T23:21:08+10:00In: Heist

A regular 20-something year old woman is accidentally dragged in to a crime circle after she is mistaken for a professional hit(wo)man.

A regular 20-something year old woman is accidentally dragged in to a crime circle after she is mistaken for a professional hit(wo)man.
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    1. Sonja Penpusher
      2020-09-07T23:24:41+10:00Added an answer on September 7, 2020 at 11:24 pm

      Interesting concept! What does she have to do after being dragged into a crime circle, what’s the action?

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    2. MadiRme Penpusher
      2020-09-07T23:34:31+10:00Added an answer on September 7, 2020 at 11:34 pm

      Thank you! 🙂 The idea is that she would have to ‘play the part’ (while trying to no actually kill anyone) as a way to, as safely as possible, get herself out of the situation

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    3. Gabriel Penpusher
      2020-09-08T05:18:38+10:00Added an answer on September 8, 2020 at 5:18 am

      That sounds like a very promising starting point, I can picture a lot of scenes that might come from that, well done. What genre do you plan that to be in? I can imagine it a confusion comedy, action thriller, gangster drama or all of that combined. 😀 (I personally would hope for all of that combined as a viewer, I think.)

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    4. dpg Singularity
      2020-09-09T04:11:33+10:00Added an answer on September 9, 2020 at 4:11 am

      Interesting premise for a plot But not yet a plot . And loglines are about plots, not premises. So it needs fleshing out.

      Unable to persuade a ruthless mobster that she is not a professional assassin, a woman must do X or else Y.

      What is the X –the objective goal? What is the Y –the stakes if she doesn’t?

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