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Posted: June 23, 20212021-06-23T04:11:46+10:00 2021-06-23T04:11:46+10:00In: SciFi

A researcher discovers a group of young children who have a collective consciousness, but no one believes him, even when he learns of the children’s plan to rid the world of all those outside their group mind.

A researcher discovers a group of young children who have a collective consciousness, but no one believes him, even when he learns of the children’s plan to rid the world of all those outside their group mind.
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    1. Mike Pedley Singularity
      2021-06-23T04:21:25+10:00Added an answer on June 23, 2021 at 4:21 am

      So what’s he going to do about it? This is just the first act, what happens for the duration of the 90min+ runtime?

      Who is this researcher? Why is he our protagonist?

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    2. Jay_Bird Penpusher
      2021-07-01T07:54:43+10:00Added an answer on July 1, 2021 at 7:54 am

      I agree with Mike. It’s potentially a very cool movie but we need to know not just what’s at stake (children ridding the world of everyone who’s not with them) but WHO the protagonist is and WHAT they are going to do in order to avoid the stakes from happening.

      I hope this is helpful and keep going with it 🙂

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