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Posted: March 24, 20192019-03-24T05:40:34+10:00 2019-03-24T05:40:34+10:00In: Fantasy

A single father/cat burglar needs to steal an ancient artifact in order to help his ailing son, grabs the attention of a 700-year-old warlord; now he must outwit CAIN to save the life of his kidnaped son.

A single father/cat burglar needs to steal an ancient artifact in order to help his ailing son, grabs the attention of a 700-year-old warlord; now he must outwit CAIN to save the life of his kidnaped son.
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    1. dpg Singularity
      2019-03-24T05:53:54+10:00Added an answer on March 24, 2019 at 5:53 am

      It’s not clear, not obvious how stealing the artifact is necessary to? heal his son.? Is it for the money he can make selling it?? Or for magical healing properties in the artifact? (The genre is fantasy which makes that a possibility.)

      And is Cain the warlord, or someone the warlord sends to do his hatchet work?

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    2. Seamoore Logliner
      2019-03-24T05:59:12+10:00Added an answer on March 24, 2019 at 5:59 am

      He starts off to steal it for the money and then by the last issue (this is for a comic book) it’s the healing properties. Cain is the warlord

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    3. variable Uberwriter
      2019-03-24T06:16:10+10:00Added an answer on March 24, 2019 at 6:16 am

      What dpg said, plus If it isn’t the biblical CAIN, you should drop the name. How does outwitting him looks on-screen?

      “After an evil guardian kidnaps his daughter for robbing his elixir, a cat burglar must rescue her before her sickness takes over”

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