A teenage girl struggles to deal with everyday life on a planet populated by aliens.
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“Struggles” is too vague. Include an inciting incident, and then create a conflict from that incident. Perhaps use her arriving on this planet as the incident: When she lands on an alien planet, a teenage girl….
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