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AndrewriterPenpusher
Posted: August 8, 20172017-08-08T22:26:26+10:00 2017-08-08T22:26:26+10:00In: Romance

When a teenage Jewish boy in Auschwitz learns his dream girl is Hitler?s daughter, he decides to stand up from the eyes of the SS and show death is not the only arousing them and not an infatuation he had on her.

When a teenage Jewish boy in Auschwitz learns his dream girl is Hitler?s daughter, he decides to stand up from the eyes of the SS and show death is not the only arousing them and not an infatuation he had on her.
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      DanielSturman Logliner
      2017-08-08T22:32:37+10:00Added an answer on August 8, 2017 at 10:32 pm

      To “set up to stay in love with Hitler’s daughter” suggests he has made a choice, but a passive one, and based on what revelation? Is the revelation that she is Hitler’s daughter? If so, then shouldn’t it be something like “When a Jewish boy in a Auschwitz learns that his crush is Hitler’s daughter…”

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      Francis_Bibeau Logliner
      2017-08-09T01:02:55+10:00Added an answer on August 9, 2017 at 1:02 am

      Very interesting. This could be played as a retelling of the classic Romeo and Juliet tale set in the Auschwitz camp. Romeo is the Jewish teenage boy and Juliet is a high-ranking German officier’s daughter. Their love faces incredible odds and they must find a way to escape.

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      Neer Shelter Singularity
      2017-08-09T15:09:54+10:00Added an answer on August 9, 2017 at 3:09 pm

      Andrew.

      After every thing we’ve written and all the notes you’ve been given, I simply can’t understand what it is you’re trying to do now.

      Look at all the comments you’ve already gotten for this concept in your other posts – they all still apply.

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