Singularity
Posted: 2020-03-02T11:58:16+10:00 In: , ,

A total loser works for a ruthless Vegas casino boss to jinx gamblers. But after he falls in love with a cocktail waitress, gamblers become winners instead. Now he must save his Lady Luck from the boss’s murderous wrath.

(39 words)

The Cooler

(2003)

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    1. Singularity

      A favorite film, but a challenging one to logline.

      I elected to break it up into 3 sentences because one l-o-n-g sentence is cumbersome, too hard to read.

      Setup, hook: A total loser works for a ruthless Vegas casino boss to jinx gamblers.

      Inciting incident, plot twist/reversal of fortune: But after he falls in love with a cocktail waitress, gamblers become winners instead.

      Objective goal and stakes: Now he must save his Lady Luck from the boss’s murderous wrath.

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    2. Uberwriter

      I think your version is pretty good. One sentence makes it clunky; this is as far as I could get-
      When love debuffs his jinx, a hapless employee must save his lady from the ruthless casino boss

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