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Posted: June 18, 20202020-06-18T06:18:55+10:00 2020-06-18T06:18:55+10:00In: Action

A traumatized ex-military professor must protect his students when he discovers that the dean and his colleagues are spies sent to eliminate him in a dangerous exercise of trust.

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    1. savinh0 Samurai
      2020-06-18T20:15:19+10:00Added an answer on June 18, 2020 at 8:15 pm

      Confusing wording: Why does he have to protect his students when he’s the one getting targeted?
      Also, protect is not strong enough imo.
      We want to know what he wants to do when he disvovers the truth about the dean and his colleagues.

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    2. hobbes Logliner
      2020-06-18T15:45:32+10:00Added an answer on June 18, 2020 at 3:45 pm

      What is “Dangerous exercise of trust”?

      I like the premise though.

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    3. Mike Pedley Singularity
      2020-06-18T18:34:26+10:00Added an answer on June 18, 2020 at 6:34 pm

      Why must he protect his students when he is the only one that is the target? As hobbes said, what is a dangerous exercise of trust? Who is meant to be trusting who? In a film about spies, I think the general rule (and somewhat cliched) is trust no-one.

      Surely his goal is to eliminate those trying to eliminate him? What’s his arc?

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