Penpusher
Posted: 2019-02-01T08:56:41+10:00 In:

A young broken girl, released from an orphanage, finally found the love and acceptance she only dreams of when she marries a respected deacon only to discover she and her children are in the fight of their lives to escape a secretly abusive husband and to ultimately find her own true spiritual identity. BTW – This is a re-write from 2 days ago.

A young broken girl, released from an orphanage, finally found the love and acceptance she only dreams of when she marries a respected deacon only to discover she and her children are in the fight of their lives to escape a secretly abusive husband and to ultimately find her own true spiritual identity. BTW – This is a re-write from 2 days ago.
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    1. Uberwriter

      The timeline is the issue and there is an emotional centre not mentioned. The timeline issue, why now is the fight for her life? She?s has had a few children to this man. So that is at least a few years of marriage. We can drop a lot of the first act baggage. Orphans crave love, so by saying orphan you get that stuff for free.

      ?After growing up in an orphanage a woman is willing to endure abuse from her preacher husband until he turn on their children put her in a fight for her life?

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