A young married couple tests the boundaries of their new invention – a teleportation device – within the confines of a hotel room unaware they are being watched very closely by outside forces with an interest in their discovery.

The logline sets up a situation but doesn’t follow through with a complete plot.? What is the objective goal, here??? And who owns the objective goal, the humanoids or the “outside forces”?? And what’s at risk, what are the stakes?? I suggest you run this logline through the logline generator.