Penpusher
Posted: 2018-05-13T19:55:43+10:00 In:

A young writer tries to accurately research her novel by getting pregnant and having an abortion, only to find out that she is infertile.

A young writer tries to accurately research her novel by getting pregnant and having an abortion, only to find out that she is infertile.
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    3 Reviews

    1. Singularity

      End of story.

      Or is it the beginning?? And if so, what does she do now?? ?What becomes her objective goal?? ? The logline sets up a situation for a plot — but doesn’t follow through with a plot.

      Consult the guidelines under the “Our formula” link at the top of the web page for guidelines on writing an industry standard logline.

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    2. Singularity

      Agreed with DPG.

      I’ll add that I’m not clear on how she can get pregnant and be infertile, the logic here doesn’t work.

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    3. Penpusher

      I almost wish the ending did not give away the character’s journey’s end…

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