After a near-death experience awakens a hopeless woman’s power to see peoples karmic past, she realizes their fates are intertwined and in order to release everyone from impending life destroying behaviors she must overcome her own insecurities while battling her abusive and manipulative mother.

Hi Kimberly,

I’ll give this a go.

After a near-death experience awakens a hopeless woman’s power to see peoples karmic past, she realizes their fates are intertwined and in order to release everyone from impending life destroying behaviors she must overcome her own insecurities while battling her abusive and manipulative mother.

— Got quite a mouthful here. Lets chop it down a bit.

Intention: must release everyone from impending life destroying behaviors – the more active goal.
must overcome her own insecurities – the subjective/emotional goal. I think we need to go with the more active goal in this logline.
Obstacle: abusive mother?

I don’t quite understand her goal of “release everyone from impending life destroying behaviours”? I think we need to be clearer. Oh – and to keep it simple too.

Attempt 1:

After a near-death experience leaves her with the ability to look into people’s pasts,
a woman must help (several victims of a traumatic incident? a group of people with a shared trauma? survivors of a traumatic incident? I dunno. When you mentioned impending life destroying behaviours – I immediately thought alcoholic or drug addicts and then I figured PTSD. Perhaps they’re all dealing with the aftermath of some traumatic past incident.)
or else. (??? what happens if she doesn’t do this? what are the stakes? what happens if decides to walk away?)

Notes:
I think you need to keep it on one track. Things like her own insecurities and the mother don’t really belong in the logline. Perhaps in the overall plot but not the logline.

I hope some of this helps.